such a well written prologue that introduces one of the main characters with such tenderness and softness- the astronaut feels cradled in the author's hand and its insane how invested you become in only a few pages. i WILL be rereading this multiple times until ch. 1 comes out <33
I'm always excited and in love with what blood-teeth writes and if it is possible to make a selfish request please even if you wish not to continue this story in the future if there's any chance you could leave it up and not have it deleted id be so happy
For the prologue itself the writing is so deeply poignant and conveys so much feeling with as little time it truly has (I especially love the sequence detailing memories and wants the astronaut longs for) it's all so good I'll probably read it over again❤️
This is so delectable! I love your imagery and the way the prologue coils up so tense like a snakestrike waiting for the perfect moment to sink in. Can't wait for more!!
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this is so good tho?! Absolutely going to keep checking back for updates
AYOOO
this looks really promising, the writing it immaculate, and the characters are very interesting. cant wait to see how this turns out!
I can't believe this was just published, I'm already excited to see how it goes!
oooh I love your writing style already, it's gorgeous. Definitely looking forward to updates ❤️
such a well written prologue that introduces one of the main characters with such tenderness and softness- the astronaut feels cradled in the author's hand and its insane how invested you become in only a few pages. i WILL be rereading this multiple times until ch. 1 comes out <33
I'm always excited and in love with what blood-teeth writes and if it is possible to make a selfish request please even if you wish not to continue this story in the future if there's any chance you could leave it up and not have it deleted id be so happy
For the prologue itself the writing is so deeply poignant and conveys so much feeling with as little time it truly has (I especially love the sequence detailing memories and wants the astronaut longs for) it's all so good I'll probably read it over again❤️
Nooo. The prologue was pretty good and I like the interface. Can't wait for chapter 1.
This is so delectable! I love your imagery and the way the prologue coils up so tense like a snakestrike waiting for the perfect moment to sink in. Can't wait for more!!
No but i hate you. You can't just end it like that. 😭😭😭😭😭😭